5 thoughts on “Heartbreak”

  1. “What It shouldn’t be” captures emotional demise accurately. The reader should be scared for anyone who would go on to invest love in him after that. Basically, this is how villains are made.

    For “What It Feels Like” it feels like a short flash clip in itself. The murder, the blood and the sheer ease with which it is performed is emotionally provoking and yet artistic. Good job, Dare.

  2. Nice piece,and a bit emotional …Eventually
    everything will fall apart .. . Love will
    become a pain for a lifetime when you end up
    with a Broken Heart!!

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